Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

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stone and the middle ages, people used to do more physical activity since the fact that they had no innovations as nowadays which allow working and doing other convenient things from the house.

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, today individuals can use technologies’ benefits and even not

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out of the room. I am a strong advocate of the opinion that

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lifestyle totally destroys people’s state and leads to hazardous consequences. In

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which the population face

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. The main reason why I am in favour of the approach that

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lifestyle has a knock-on effect on

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society in general and on individuals personally

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health

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. People worldwide struggle with

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problems as obesity, lack of

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muscle mass and spinal diseases. The wide-spreading of

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brand-new technologies became one of the vital causes of these.

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of going to the gyms or doing other exercises like having a stroll or jogging, which may have a positive effect on their organism status, both

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and immatures prefer going for doing something entertaining at the house - watching TV, scrolling phone or reading. There occurred a possibility of distant working and freelance jobs, and

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why procrastination has a major influence on

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citizens,

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restricting their physical activity. One possible action to deal with

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tendency is to start educational lectures for the children to prevent

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in the future.

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way the treatment finance question will be managed too,

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the vast amount of money

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spent on tackling health problems, which becomes a serious obstruction for a population. I believe that if the psychological part is involved too, it will result in a more successful completion

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an emotional aspect. Precautionary measures and

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with a specialist for managing the aftereffects are

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essential components of

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society’s well-being. All things considered,

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style of acting leads to irreparable health

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repercussions

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finance

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unstability

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and mental breakdown. I reckon that to avoid these, preclusive movements are the best way. If people make an appropriate effort in the beginning,

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the result will not have

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a negatory tone on the population.