In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Making the
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's new trend and
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is on virals widely in the world
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these days
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positive way to promote their new identities to consumers but sometimes there are some voices that creating a
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new trend is going too far away. In
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will discuss
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and focused
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on
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points of emphasizing new products and
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describe some demerits of it.
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, people
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easily get attracted to
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thing they not have seen before.
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is the reason why luxury brands always think about
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making
a new trend and
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the new design of products.
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, sometimes there are some cases new items that some companies invented
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the symbol of the
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.
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, the French luxury
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Jaquemus released
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new design of a tiny belt bag and
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became the landmark of the company. If the new items are
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people, it is a good chance for
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to change images
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. As
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mentioned above, there are many good influences promoting new
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.
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, some new trends or things are promoted too
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often and they drag consumers not to purchase their
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things
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anymore.
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, there is a Korean cosmetic
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named 'Gahi', the company promoted the beauty balm
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on tv programs or youtube channels and eventually the promotion influenced people
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tired of watching the same products many times.
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, if the brands are too focused on showing new things, the signature items will be getting ignored,
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they will lose their identities. In conclusion, even if there are a few minus points are exist but promoting new things brings back more beneficial effects. So
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think if we do marketing in a smart way there are more
postive
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positive
thoughts we can expect.
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