Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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recent times as people feel it can maximize their potential

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some reckon that co-operation is the key to success. I feel that both views have their own pros and cons respectively. To initiate with, watching another student get better marks than you when you tried your best to study hard can be extremely demotivating for some and make them accept defeat in a very cruel way. Though

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it might prove to have an improvement in some

children

but

competition

can bring a sense of jealousy between students which can impact their relations and

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unhealthy for their age groups. On the other side,

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with others has a lot of merits with it being extremely beneficial in the future and

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healthy

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between

children

without any sense of jealousy.

Additionally

, it helps in improving a student's weaknesses when they know they can

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and ask their partner or a friend frankly without any

competition

involved. I feel that

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is a much better strategy than asking

children

to compete aggressively and 'get better marks' than their classmates.

Furthermore

,

competition

can create a belief among the

children

that they cannot score more once they have tried their best and

that is

their peak which is absolutely wrong.

Moreover

, co-operating helps when

children

have to work together in teams and it produces a much better result than

competition

among the team. In conclusion, though

children

are asked to compete with their mates and be better than them, it is not the right strategy to deal with a child.

Furthermore

, a child should be allowed to develop

along with

their friends and not against them.