"Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and it’s widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldn’t follow them and that we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?"
Is
has been said that the minimum legal Correct your spelling
It
age
for driving and riding should be increased so as to improve road
safety
. Personally, I firmly disagree with this
idea for two main reasons.
To begin
with, in order to improve road
safety
, we should emphasize on
people’s driving and riding Change preposition
apply
skills
rather than their age
. The main reason why there are thousands of traffic accidents is that because the driving tests are too simple, those who do not have standard skills
still qualify for driving licenses. For instance
, although
some teenagers do not have driving licenses, they drive well on the road
. However
,some adults are not good at driving and
lead to numerous driving accidents. Correct word choice
which
Consequently
,there is no doubt that young age
is not always the reason why roads
is
unsafe and driving Change the verb form
are
skills
are the most essential part of road
safety
.
The second reason is that a proper design of roads
is essential
Correct quantifier usage
more essential
than
people’s driving Change preposition
for
age
. When the roads
are designed in a strange way, although
people follow it
properly, they still will cause car accidents. Take, Taiwan, Correct pronoun usage
them
for example
. Taiwan is regarded as “pedestrian
hell” by BBC Correct article usage
a “pedestrian
due to
the fact that pedestrians have to walk closely with vehicles as the government did not design roads
which are suitable for every road
user. In conclusion, designing good roads
for Add an article
the user
a user
user
is far Fix the agreement mistake
users
important
than increasing Correct quantifier usage
more important
minimum
Add an article
the minimum
age
of
driving.
To summarize, as far as I am concerned, I disagree with the idea of rising the legal Change preposition
for
age
of
driving and riding is not useful to improve Change preposition
for
road
safety
for two major reasons. Firstly
,training the public’s driving skills
before they get their licenses is more effective to improve road
safety
. Secondly
, planning out roads
which are suitable for every road
user is also
a key point to help the improvement of road
safety
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