The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
The table provides information about how many
people
visiting
Ashdown Wrong verb form
visited
Museum
for a year after and before the refurbishment. Then
, the charts depict the result of surveys from visitors
about their satification
after going to the Correct your spelling
satisfaction
museum
during the same two periods. Overall
, it is obvious that a lot of people
went to the museum
after reconstruction and showed satification
from the surveys.
During the year before refurbishment, there were only 74.000 Correct your spelling
satisfaction
people
visiting the museum
. This
number increased significantly by 18.000 visitors
during the year after refurbishment.
It can be seen from the surveys that a lot of people
felt dissatisfied in the first period at 40% while
10% of visitors
felt very dissatisfied. These percentages decreased dramatically at 15% and 5% sequently
. Correct your spelling
sequentially
Then
, there was only 15% of visitors
felt very satisfied and 30% satisfied after visiting the museum
. These figures jumped by 20% for the former and by 10% for the latter. Meanwhile, there was 5% of visitors
giving
no Wrong verb form
gave
respons
for both Correct your spelling
response
of
periods.Change preposition
apply
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