The charts below shows the propertion of the energy produced from different sources in a country between 1985 and 2003
Two pie charts illustrate the information on the
energy
produced from six different resources in a country in the years
1985 and 2003. The figures are given in percentages.
Overall
,it can be seen from the charts that oil
is the most used energy
in both
compared years
, while
other renewable is used the less in both
years
.
Apparently, the proportion of oil
takes responsibility for the most energy
in this
country, both
in 1985 and 2003 for 52% and 39% respectively.According to
oil
data, the oil
used declined by 11%. Although
natural gas,coal and nuclear occupy nearly half of all consumed energy
in two years
,there have different proportions in both
charts -in 1985 is 13%, 8% and 22% while
in 2003 is 23%,22% and 8% respectively.
On the contrary
, other
renewable Change the wording
another
energy
is occupied the less but the percentage of this
energy
increased from 1% to 4%. Meanwhile, hydro energy
remains stable at 4%.Submitted by k.kamonkan on
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