The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph compares the
million
of Correct your spelling
millions
visitors
who stayed on cruise
ships
and stayed on island
Add an article
the island
with
including Change preposition
apply
total
Add an article
the total
number
of received tourists between 2010 and 2017 for a particular Carribean
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
Island
.
It can be noticeable that sum
of tourists Correct article usage
the sum
have
shown an upward trend. Change the verb form
has
While
had some
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been some
fluctations
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fluctuations
on
specific years of period, Change preposition
in
island
and cruise
ships
tenants were supporting Change the noun form
ship
this
trend generally.
In 2010, explorers who preferred to stay on cruise
ships
accounted for 0.75 millions
, Change to singular
million
while
its
counterparts who pleasured to Correct pronoun usage
their
spent
their Wrong verb form
spend
times
on Fix the agreement mistake
time
island
Correct article usage
the island
was
0.25 Correct subject-verb agreement
were
millions
. By 2012, Change to singular
million
cruise
ships
Change the noun form
ship
visitors
saw a slight decrease to the same number
where they began. On the other hand
, for the same period, islander tourists increased moderately by just under 1 millions
. After 2012, Change to singular
million
cruise
ships
have
started to attract Unnecessary verb
apply
majority
of Correct article usage
the majority
visitors
, with Correct article usage
an increased
increased
dramatically from 0.5 Replace the word
increase
millions
to 2 Change to singular
million
millions
by the end of the examined years. At the same time, Change to singular
million
island
dwellers showed mere small addition by
0.25 Change preposition
of
millions
Correct your spelling
million
of
more.
Correct your spelling
or
Total
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A total
The total
number
of visitors
was exactly accounted for 1 million in 2010. This
complete number
was
increased dramatically to 3.5 Unnecessary verb
apply
millions
by 2017 with a neglected stabilization between 2015 and 2016.Change to singular
million
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words visitors, cruise, ships, island, number, millions with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
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