Machines have taken over domestic jobs that used to be done by hand. What are the advantages and disadvantage of this? Give examples from your own experience.

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era, the expansion of technology has made our life easier and more comfortable. There are so many technologies in various sectors,

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the advantages and disadvantages

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using technology in our

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. Earlier, people used to do house chores manually using their

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, and it required a lot of

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and maximum effort. Nowadays, there are many industries that create and sell household

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machine

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machines

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, vacuum

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,

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, and many more. These

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not only save us a lot of

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but

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energy. We can spend less

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cleaning or cooking

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and can spend it on other activities.

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, with

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we can multi-task activities,

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becomes beneficial if we do not have enough

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or urgent matters.

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, having

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machine

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makes us do less physical activity

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because everything can be done just by clicking a button on the

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makes us depend more on

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, when it is broken, we feel that we should buy another one,

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it can be done manually using our hands.

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, these

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are not cheap. Some of it,

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millions of rupiah.

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makes it difficult for certain people to afford it. We

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have to set a separate cost every month for electricity bills. In conclusion,

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development of technology makes our life easier, but more money is needed to buy and maintain

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machine

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, if we need to buy a household

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, we must plan a budget, so it will not be a burden to the family financially.