The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
line chart depicts the figures of questions which were asked by tourists in one city through the period from January to June in 2001.It clear
from the graph that a higher number of questions were asked in person.
Add a missing verb
is clear
According to
what is shown,the Correct quantifier usage
number of enquirer's
enquirer's
by telephone Change noun form
enquirers
were fluctuated
during the period from January till March.Change to the active voice
fluctuated
Then
it remained steadily
from March until April.After Change the word
steady
that
it increased gradually in April Add a comma
,that
as well as
the following two months.
In addition
,there was a moderate decline in the questions by emails throughout the period from January till
Change preposition
to
may
.Capitalize the word
May
Then
it maintained the same level which was just below 400.The numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
in person
Add a hyphen
in-person
enquirer's
Change the noun form
enquirers
enquirer
grow
rapidly and it reached it is peak nearly just over 1800 in June .
Wrong verb form
grown
To sum up
,we could say that the numbers of in person
Add a hyphen
in-person
enquirer's
Change noun form
enquirers
were
the highest through six months in 2001.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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