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Fossil fuels are essential for producing electricity, powering industry and fueling transportation. However, one day we will reach a point when all the world’s fossil fuels have been depleted. How can we conserve these resources? What are some alternatives to fossil fuels?

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It is certainly true that over the past 100 years, the world has been depending on fossil
fuels
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 in many fields;
however
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, at some point, all our resources will be depleted.
This
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 essay will discuss the methods of preserving these non-renewable energies and other alternatives to them. the best way to conserve our resources of fossil
fuels
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 is by lessening their usage, governments have to encourage corporates and individuals to utilize them less,
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,
persuading
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by persuading
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 people through ads and commercials to start using tramways
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 subways
instead
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 of cars.
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, transportation will rely not so much on gasoline.
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, governments have
to begin
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 introducing alternative sources of
energy
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 in some fields,
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, in the car industry, governments in cooperation with corporates have to focus on building electric cars as a replacement for petrol cars in the future. There are other options
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 of fossil
fuels
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, solar
energy
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 is a good example and it doesn't require much, just setting solar panels in an area nearby and
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, all the demands of electricity are covered, an article published years ago said that a small spot in the Sahara Desert can supply all the world with its need in electricity. There is,
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, one
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 alternative to mention which is wind
energy
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, and the concept is not different from solar power, wind farms can produce massive amounts of electricity and can help cover the needs of humanity in
energy
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.
To conclude
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,
it is clear that
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 the world needs to start conserving fossil
fuels
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,
along with
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 introducing new sources of
energy
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 in the near future.

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