The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

The line graph illustrates the

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of people who listened to

radio

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the radio

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or watched television throughout the

day

in

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between October and November in 1992. Percentage shows the

amount

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of people over 4 years old.

Overall

, television is a more popular choice among the British population.

Although

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at

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the morning people mostly prefer

radio

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the radio

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,

evening

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the evening

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TV audience is twice as big.

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is the least active period during the

day

for both

radio

and TV. With regards to the

radio

, the

day

usually started with nearly zero activity from 1 a.

m

to 5 a.

m

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Then

,

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rose rapidly to the peak of approximately 25% of the UK population at 8 a.

m

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After that, the audience started to slowly

decreasing

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with a little fluctuation to hit a low of nearly 5

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at the end

of the

day

. On the opposite,

TV

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audience was quite small not only at night, but

also

in the morning, remained relatively stable at approximately 5% from 1 a.

m

. to 11 a.

m

., but

then

started to grow steadily till reaching the highest point of nearly 45% at 9 p.

m

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