Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has long been much contention about whether countries should train their sportsperson by building specialized
facilities
exclusively catering to their abilities or whether the countries should build
sports
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that is
accessible to all the population groups. In order to see whether the former notion outdoes the latter, we need to look at both sides of the debate. The most telling argument in
favor
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of building
sports
facilities
only for the athletes comes from the
fact
that excellence in any sport is achieved when the sportsman has the ability to showcase his talents to the world, ultimately affecting the economic prosperity of the nation. To be more exact, if a country caters specifically to the need of the
athlete
that it will have more capability to represent its nation at an international competition and
also
excel in the game which boosts the economic growth of the country.
Besides
this
, building a specialized facility only for the top
athlete
will
also
ensure that there is less wastage of
sports
budget to build some useless
facilities
which might not even be used by the general public. Needless to say, all these merits of catering to top athletes will hold the
government
in good stead as far as the proper allocation of budget is concerned. Notwithstanding the
fact
that
government
should look after its top
athlete
, it is not to say that the
government
should not provide
sports
facilities
for other people. The primary reason stems from the
fact
that all taxpayers of the country have the right to access
sports
facilities
whether they are athletes or not.
Apart from
this
, it is the moral responsibility of the
government
to invest in the health of its citizen and not
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about the specific target group only. In conclusion, I would not wish to underestimate the value of training
top
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athlete
community despite the
fact
that
this
might
effect
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the
overall
healthy
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of other groups of
population
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the population
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.
Nevertheless
, I firmly believe that
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goverbemnt
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government
governments
should invest in training top sportsmen.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • specialised facilities
  • train top athletes
  • international sports
  • boost
  • reputation
  • attract
  • sporting events
  • access
  • general public
  • inequality
  • opportunities
  • overemphasis
  • elite sports
  • neglect
  • grassroots development
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