The course director of your previous college has invited you to attend a party for new students, and he has also asked you to give a talk about studying overseas. You have an important examination on the same day so you cannot attend the party. Write a letter to the director to apologize and to explain why you cannot attend the event. Suggest another date when you could give your talk.

Dear Mr Smith, I would like to thank you that you invited me to attend an event with a new batch of students and I am writing
this
letter to inform you that it is difficult for me to visit in
this
party. I want to apologise in advance because I have a final exam for a dentistry course. You know that I am working hard for the
last
three years to achieve
this
goal.
Finally
, I passed two exams
this
year and
this
is the
last
interview which I have to pass to achieve my aim. It would be great if you could fix my meeting with these students next month on 25 March 2023. I will prepare my presentation after the final exam and I know
this
talk will definitely help students who are studying abroad. I will assist them with our college exam preparation pattern . I want to say sorry again for
this
inconvenience. I hope
this
will not affect our relationship. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Nick Jones
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