The diagram shows a process of making a storage area from a material called concrete canvas
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information regarding the process of making a storage area from a material known as concrete canvas.
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a cancav
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wrapp
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wrap
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manufactured
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pegs in the corner.
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put
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use
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in Airpump
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they built Linking Words
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the
until
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to
giving
the Watering.Wrong verb form
gave
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it took to Add a comma
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setting
down to 20 -24 hours after that it is ready to Replace the word
set
storing
bricks.Change the verb
store
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