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It is common nowadays for each member of the family to have their own piece of modern technology. Some people think this will lead to a breakdown in family relationships and communication. To what extent do you agree?

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Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether the advent of sophisticated modern technology
such
 as mobile phones, laptops, and pads has helped to enhance and improve people’s relationships and interactions or whether the opposite has become the case. Personally, I strongly advocate the former view.
This
 essay will make the decision to overweigh both conditions the benefits versus drawbacks and prove arguments. On the one hand, there is ample, powerful, almost daily evidence that
such
 technology can be detrimental, especially to the younger generation who are more easily affected by its addictive nature and which can result in people feeling more isolated from society. The central reason behind onefold, according, is dependence on
such
 devices is built up frighteningly easily which may have a damaging effect on mental health, and
then
 undoubtedly, the invention of online sites and apps,
such
 as Twitter and Facebook has reduced crucial face-to-face interactions dramatically.
For instance
, research by Mongolian experts demonstrated that 90% of people in their 30s spend 20 hours per week on Messenger and similar platforms to chat with their friends
instead
 of meeting up and spending quality time together.
On the other hand
, its multifold advantages cannot be denied. The popularity of technology
such
 as cell phones allows people to connect freely and easily without some geographical barriers.
For example
, an extensive study by Mongolian Council abroad illustrated that use applications like Facetime and Messenger to chat with their families, are less likely to experience loneliness than those who do not. Consistent with
this
 line of thinking are the arguments and examples given I firmly believe that
overall
 communication filled up the chance of meeting like in real life without the need to fly.
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