some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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It is often argued that
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mainly tend to learn new
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for either
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or working purposes.
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some
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think there are more
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to learn foreign
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. I completely disagree with that learning
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are not only for working and travelling but
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there are a lot of other leading
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for it.
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,
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learning a new
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is considered a difficult mission
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sometimes
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will have to learn
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foreign
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in order to work or live in some countries. As it is mandatory for anyone to
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to speak , listen and read effectively the
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of the
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they're living in.
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some countries make it essential to achieve certain
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language
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proficiency to be able to grant a travel and live visa.
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, working as a doctor in Germany requires a certain level of understanding of the german
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so that the doctor could communicate
propraly
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properly
with his patients.
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, it is considered that working and travelling are the major factors contributing
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learning new foreign
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.
On the other hand
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, there are more
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driving
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to study other
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such
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as study and familial
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. Nowadays studying other cultures is quite important and the student usually will have to study their
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so that he can understand their literature , social behaviour and manners. Every
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country
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language
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is a vital point to learn and get the full picture of the
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's history and background.
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,
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sometimes decide to learn other
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when they have a family member living in a different
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.
therefore
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,
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language
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is
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definitely
crucial to communicate with others .
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if someone has a grandmother from France, he'll have to learn French so that he can speak freely with her.
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, learning new foreign
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is an important key factor in reaching many goals in life and there are many
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driving
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to learn a foreign
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that
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open doors for everyone to communicate and reach others without any
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barriers.
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