some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

It is often argued that
people
mainly tend to learn new
languages
for either
traveling
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or working purposes.
while
some
people
think there are more
reasons
to learn foreign
languages
. I completely disagree with that learning
languages
are not only for working and travelling but
also
there are a lot of other leading
reasons
for it.
Firstly
,
Although
learning a new
language
is considered a difficult mission
but
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sometimes
people
will have to learn
specific
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foreign
language
in order to work or live in some countries. As it is mandatory for anyone to
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be able
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to speak , listen and read effectively the
language
of the
country
they're living in.
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some countries make it essential to achieve certain
of
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language
proficiency to be able to grant a travel and live visa.
for example
, working as a doctor in Germany requires a certain level of understanding of the german
language
so that the doctor could communicate
propraly
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properly
with his patients.
Hence
, it is considered that working and travelling are the major factors contributing
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learning new foreign
languages
.
On the other hand
, there are more
reasons
driving
people
to study other
languages
such
as study and familial
reasons
. Nowadays studying other cultures is quite important and the student usually will have to study their
language
so that he can understand their literature , social behaviour and manners. Every
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language
is a vital point to learn and get the full picture of the
country
's history and background.
Moreover
,
people
sometimes decide to learn other
languages
when they have a family member living in a different
country
.
therefore
,
new
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language
is
definetly
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definitely
crucial to communicate with others .
for
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if someone has a grandmother from France, he'll have to learn French so that he can speak freely with her.
To conclude
, learning new foreign
languages
is an important key factor in reaching many goals in life and there are many
reasons
driving
people
to learn a foreign
language
that
wil
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will
open doors for everyone to communicate and reach others without any
language
barriers.
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