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It is common that in many companies people from different ages work together in a same team Do the adventages outweigh the disadventages ?

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These days it is becoming a common trend that old and young aged collaborate with each other in firms as a team. I totally agree that positives are more than negatives in
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 will discuss and give the reason to appear that working various ages with each other in firms has more benefits. On the one hand,
anevident
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an evident
evident
 benefit is that younger can benefit from the recommendations of older ones.The aged
staffhas
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staff has
 a lot of skills and
experiences
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 so
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 can guide and teach the apprentice. If the novice again job
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improvement
,the
company
 will raise output.
Hence
 the youth will gain more wages.
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,the skilful leadership instruct the inexpert personnel
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the company's
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machinary
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machinery
.
Hence
, the young staff learn how to improve and climb to the top of the career leader
consequently
theunskilfulpersonal
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the unskilful personal
 has a promotion prospect in his job and
company
 will progress satisfactorily.
On the other hand
,one major drawback is the conflict
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 the
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seniors
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 and
junior
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juniors
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utilize
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the
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modern techniques.
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,a milk producer
company
 in Iran closed for six
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due to
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 disagreement between the young and the old aged staff.
Although
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 staff has leadership skills ,they do not have enough information about modern techniques and high-tech
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machineries
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as a result
 they hold
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different
differing
 opinions. In conclusion,
although
 collaboration of various ages has a
drowback
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drawback
such
 as conflict
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 the senior and the junior ,
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belive
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believe
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thet
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that
 the benefit like giving a recommendation and
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advice to
novice
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novices
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 outweigh its downside.
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