The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the plans of an industrial area in
the
Norbiton town at present and after future changes Correct article usage
apply
of
the Change preposition
to
site
.
Overall
, it is apparent that industrial area
will be demolished completely and houses will be built Fix the agreement mistake
areas
instead
of factory
buildings.
In the planned future development site
, a school will be built at
the Change preposition
on
right hand
side Add a hyphen
right-hand
ot
the Correct your spelling
of
map
in the place of a factory
building. A long
Correct article usage
Long
the
Correct article usage
apply
road
which connects the school to the centre
square
, three housing blocks will be built in the place of four factory
buildings beside the
each side of the Remove the article
apply
road
. Moreover
, an avenue will be created to connect a newly built playground in the north-eastern
part of the Correct your spelling
northeastern
map
near the river.
At northern
part of the Add an article
the northern
map
, a high-rise flats
will be built and a Correct the article-noun agreement
a high-rise flat
high-rise flats
road
will be constructed to join the housing to the centre
square
of the map
. Furthermore
, a bridge will be provided to cross the mentioned road
over the river. In the new street, after the bridge to the south, a housing block will be constructed. Some amenities such
as a Medical centre
will be created at the south east
of the Correct your spelling
southeast
centre
square
. Besides
, a factory
site
in the south west
of the Correct your spelling
southwest
centre
square
will be replaced by shops. As a last
change
, a smaller Correct your spelling
chance
square
will be added to the south of the main square
in the
Correct article usage
apply
conjuction
with the main Correct your spelling
conjunction
road
of the site
wich
Correct your spelling
which
lie
in the south part of the Change the verb form
lies
sites
from east to west.Fix the agreement mistake
site
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