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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

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The plans represent the layout of Southwest Airport before and after development next year.
Overall
, it will be bigger and substantially improved both in the Departures and Arrivals Areas. The first aspect of the development that we can notice in the plan is the gates inside the airport. It will be significantly increased from 8 to 18 gates which can be travelled with the new sky train.
While
 people wait for their flight departure time, families may enjoy the new shops near the Departure Airport Gates. In the Departures space, the location of the Check-in field and Café will be relocated.
Furthermore
, there will be a new Bag drop where people store their luggage. In the Arrivals operation, now we have none of the facilities provided.
However
, after the development, There will be a new Café, and ATM
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 and the most important thing is the Car Hire field where people can wait for their pick-up car to come.
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