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Developments in tourism offer very little direct benefit for residents who live in these areas. To what extent do you agree?

#developments #tourism #offer #benefit #residents #areas
Across the
world
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 many countries focus on the development of
tourism
. Governments offer profits to
localites
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localities
 that are sourced from
the
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tourism
. I completely disagree with the point that residents will get
less
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fewer
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 direct benefits with the development
in
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of
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tourism
. In the forthcoming
paragraphs
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i
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 would justify my view on
this
.
To begin
 with, many countries like
dubai
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,
singapore
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Singapore
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 and
malaysia
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Malaysia
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 are mostly
dependend
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dependent
 on their international visitors.
This
 will open the way to increase
businees
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businesses
 like hotels, resorts, amusement parks
ets
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etc
.people can choose to be taxi drivers, tour guides and many more.Because
when ever
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the
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tourist travels to
the
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touristic
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tourist
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places
 first they need a cab to travel and
same
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 as with the tourist guide.People have different requirements some go for less budget and some choose to go for higher.
For example
places
 like
bangkok
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Bangkok
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,
thailand
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Thailand
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 and Andaman have very cheap shopping
places
 where tourists can buy
the
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electronics and clothing items. The
localites
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localities
locality
 will sell the handmade products to
the
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foreigners which
benefit
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benefits
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 both the government and the seller. To extend it the development of
the
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remote touristic
places
 will provide the local pupil with more resources
such
 as power supply, water supply ,transportation and much more . It will eventually lead to small sector businesses and
self employment
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. In conclusion , many countries are substantially benefited from
the
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tourism
in
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the
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history .There
was
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 many doors opened for improvement in all the sectors.
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