Reopening new mining companies on islands can be harmful to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Islands
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are regarded as one of the most versatile tourist attractions and home
of
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natural minerals and resources because of the ocean surrounding them.
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rapid globalisation, the need
of
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minerals and natural energy has become evident. Taking
this
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into consideration, many mining
oraganisations
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organisations
organizations
are being established on the
islands
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which are full of natural materials. I
completly
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completely
agree that
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the inaugeration
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inaugeration
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integration
of
industralization
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industrialization
industrialisation
will cause depletion to the
islands
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despite
it's
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economic benefits. To start with, mining companies provide huge
economical
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economic
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growth
due to
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the rising demand
of
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natural resources and minerals. The rise of mills and mining sites on
islands
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give
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rise to pollution
on
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the locations.
Islands
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has
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their own natural flora and fauna which
get
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are
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affected
with
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the intrusion of
man made
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factories. Lots of natural plants and animal species die of the
toxigens
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toxins
released by these sites.
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, the outbreak of industrialisation on the resourceful
islands
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, not only
affect
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affects
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the environment of the land but
depleating
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depleting
it's
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its
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surroundings too. As all the
islands
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are surrounded by water
and
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tere
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there
is a vast aquatic life in the sea which
is
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vanished away with the toxic chemical discharge into the sea waters.
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, lots of marine
spieces
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species
are on the verge of extinction.
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to
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,
devastation
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the devastation
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of the
islandic
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island
atmosphere has huge drawbacks
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the local communities residing nearby the shore and on the
islands
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itslef
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itself
.
Islands
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are always been considered as one of the most gorgeous tourist places. Damaging
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nature will result in low demand for visiting that place causing unemployment for the local places.
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, local tribes and groups depend on
islands
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for their basic needs like food and fishing. Destroying the natural resources will cause a great deal of suffering for them.
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up
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with
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, establishing the
industralization
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industrialization
industrialisation
on the
islands
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is not only harmful
for
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islands
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the islands
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but for the local and aquatic life too. it is deadly for the plant and animal life existing on the island and in the sea too.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ecosystem disruption
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • habitat destruction
  • pollution
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable sources
  • economic gains
  • export revenues
  • eco-friendly
  • regulations
  • land rehabilitation
  • environmental degradation
  • eco-tourism
  • case study
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