Reopening new mining companies on islands can be harmful to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Islands

are regarded as one of the most versatile tourist attractions and home

of

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natural minerals and resources because of the ocean surrounding them.

Due to

the

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rapid globalisation, the need

of

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minerals and natural energy has become evident. Taking

this

into consideration, many mining

oraganisations

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organisations

organizations

are being established on the

islands

which are full of natural materials. I

completly

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completely

agree that

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inaugeration

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integration

of

industralization

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industrialization

industrialisation

will cause depletion to the

islands

despite

it's

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economic benefits. To start with, mining companies provide huge

economical

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economic

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growth

due to

the rising demand

of

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natural resources and minerals. The rise of mills and mining sites on

islands

give

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rise to pollution

on

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the locations.

Islands

has

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their own natural flora and fauna which

get

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affected

with

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the intrusion of

man made

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factories. Lots of natural plants and animal species die of the

toxigens

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toxins

released by these sites.

Secondly

, the outbreak of industrialisation on the resourceful

islands

, not only

affect

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the environment of the land but

depleating

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depleting

it's

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surroundings too. As all the

islands

are surrounded by water

and

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tere

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there

is a vast aquatic life in the sea which

is

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vanished away with the toxic chemical discharge into the sea waters.

Therefore

, lots of marine

spieces

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species

are on the verge of extinction.

In addition

to

this

,

devastation

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of the

islandic

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island

atmosphere has huge drawbacks

on

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the local communities residing nearby the shore and on the

islands

itslef

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itself

.

Islands

are always been considered as one of the most gorgeous tourist places. Damaging

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nature will result in low demand for visiting that place causing unemployment for the local places.

Moreover

, local tribes and groups depend on

islands

for their basic needs like food and fishing. Destroying the natural resources will cause a great deal of suffering for them.

To sum

up

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with

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, establishing the

industralization

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industrialization

industrialisation

on the

islands

is not only harmful

for

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islands

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but for the local and aquatic life too. it is deadly for the plant and animal life existing on the island and in the sea too.