Many countries in the world find that their cities are overcrowded and need to expand. Is the solution to this to build in existing cities, or build new developments outside?

In

this

recent years, a lot of

cities

claim to e overpopulated and it is urgent to expand the

cities

.

This

essay believes that the best solution is to build new development

to

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the

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outside of the

cities

, and will try to elaborate more about the reason behind it.

To begin

with, overpopulated

cities

mean that there is no

space

left in the

cities

, so the most suitable action to fix

this

is to expand the

cities

to the outside.

For example

, building a new department store, new schools, and new factories outside the

cities

,

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may attract workers to move next to their office. These actions can lead to making some

space

in the

cities

,

while

the

area

near the

cities

also

get

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to experience new technology in their

area

.

Furthermore

, developments outside the

cities

also

may lead to a better economy in the

area

. To give a clear example, the government in the

area

can receive more tax from all the companies and factories, and the price of the land in the

area

also

may rise

due to

the increased demand.

In addition

, widening the

cities

increased the possibility of people getting

a

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larger

space

for their houses.

This

condition can be happening because there is still a lot of

space

available in the region. A larger

space

is suitable for those who have a lot of family members.

For example

, families with 2 or 3 children, can give a separate room for their kids, if they build a house in the new region rather than in crowded

cities

.

Moreover

, expanding the

cities

can make a better environment for the resident, because there is still less pollution in the new

area

. In conclusion, expanding the

cities

to the outer

area

is the best solution for overpopulated

cities

. The action can make the outer

area

get new technology and rise the possibility for

a big families

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to get extra

space

.