the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing

the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing
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Three
pie charts and a table illustrate the information on imported
fish
between 1988 and 2000 - the table shows the total
value
of billions of
dollar
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dollars
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in
three
different years
while
the
three
pie charts show the source of
fish
imported to the US.
Overall
, It can be seen from the data that the total imported
value
in the year 2000 is the highest
while
, in 1988 is the lowest.
Moreover
,It is noticeable that Canada is the most source of imported
fish
to the US in 1988 but other sources exceed to occupy most of both years. In 1988, the
value
of
fish
imported to the US is 6.57 billion Dollars, the lease of
three
years and
then
the imported
value
increased gradually to 8.52 and 10.72 billion Dollars in 1992 and 2000 respectively. Interestingly,
although
imported
fish
from Cannada occupy the most proportion of sources is 60% in 1988, In 1992 and 2000 it
is
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exceeded other sources.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words three, fish, value with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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