The quality of healthcare a person received should not depend on the size of their bank balance. The government is responsible for providing a high level of healthcare for all its citizens. To what extent do you agree?

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In contemporary times, medical assistance to everyone is extremely important. All medical facilities should not be provided only to wealthy
people
. Healthcare is a basic necessity and it should be provided by public authorities to the natives of the country,
according to
my perception.
To begin
with, it is believed that, only certain
people
have access to high-level healthcare systems in some parts.Individuals are discriminated
on
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terms of rich or poor.Rich
people
are given all the medical treatments because of the cash they have in their pockets. In those areas, poor
people
cannot even think of going to hospitals for their treatment.
For example
, most developing countries have privatization of the Health sector, so,
people
are treated
accordingly
to the amount of money they have in those countries. Talking about the
government
's role, they should take accountability regarding providing high-class medical facilities to all
people
.
Government
should allocate some percentage of the budget solely focused on health and safety purposes. As residents of every country pay tax to the
government
and in return they should get
this
bare minimum basic necessity. It should be the
government
's number one priority to provide excellent medical services to all its
people
.
For instance
, during the pandemic how much
government
regulations and investment played a major role in the wellness of
people
of any country.
Thus
, it is the responsibility of public authorities to provide basic services.
To conclude
, I would say, all the residents work hard and pay taxes to the
government
and it is their basic right to get health coverage in return as they are responsible for the safety and well-being of every citizen.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • basic human right
  • societal well-being
  • quality of life
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • social unrest
  • affordability
  • accessibility
  • social justice
  • equality
  • resource allocation
  • quality standards
  • private healthcare
  • profit
  • taxes
  • burden
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