Q. The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the

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system suffers a lot to deal with modern medical problems. a common opinion is that overweight people are facing hurdles in reducing their fat and

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risk state. Physical education

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from school days would help them to deal with

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issue.

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, I strongly agree that introducing physical training chapters in a book

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putting a strain on their medications.

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, obesity is the most common unhealthy condition for almost many of the folks around us which gains more medical complications. To overcome

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, crowds should be aware of their physical

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by boosting healthy

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as walking, jogging, running, swimming and cycling.

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, educational institutions which follow stringent rules for physique maintenance would allow youngsters to incline more healthy training.

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, the result can be positive as it satisfies our expectations.

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, It is widely accepted that many parents raise

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against

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training lessons

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their children as they think those chapters might ruin their children's studies. Despite

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, few parents are still concerned about their child's physical life

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mental life. To illustrate, raising awareness campaigns regarding physical

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could help parents to acquire more knowledge on

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criteria.

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obesity is treatable by

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outdoor

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, yet many fail to practice it. In conclusion, cardio

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should begin from their school days to live a healthy life till

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. In my experience, I would like to support physical education courses to be included in the school curriculum so students to live without any errors in their

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