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The images below explain the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain.

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The picture below describes the mechanism of
acid
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rain
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 caused by
pollutants
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 from modern life contaminating the environment and food chain. In general, there are 3 main processes where
acid
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rain
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 occurs.
At
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 the first step,
pollutants
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 vapour
to
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into
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 the sky and absorb by the
clouds
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.
The
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 next process, the contaminated cloud laden with
pollutants
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 will drop the
acid
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rain
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 when it is heavy enough. And
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acid
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rain
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 could fall into the food chain area. There are many
pollutants
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 caused by
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acid
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rain
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,
such
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 as carbon dioxide, sulphur dioxide, nitrogen oxides, mercury, and other compounds. Those particles came from several resources like housing, transportation, factories, and power stations.
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 the toxic waste rises, it will be absorbed by
clouds
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.
This
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 process caused the
clouds
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 laden with
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pollutants
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. In the next part, the polluted
clouds
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 can move by
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 another country or continents and stop above the food
chain
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chains
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 area
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 as land with trees and plants, hills and fields, rivers, and lakes. In the end, when the
clouds
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 are heavy enough,
it
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 will drop
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acid
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rain
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 and contaminate
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nature.

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