The diagram below illustrates how a simple water filter is constructed and how it functions to produce clean drinking water.
the
process
diagram shows a construction of a drinking water
filter and its process
of producing drinking water
.
this
process
has two major devices, a barrel-shaped bucket
and a drinking water
storage tank with a tap. there are three filter layers in the bucket
among which charcoal is placed between sand and gravel. at the bottom of the bucket
. the third layer is linked by a long pipe with a pump to a close
tank.
there are two main steps in the production of drinking Replace the word
closed
water
, the process
begins with opening the lid of the bucket
and pouring impure water
into the bucket
. then
, the impure water
is filtered through sand, charcoal and gravel layer in order to produce pure drinking water
. at the last
step of the process
, the pure water
is pumped into the tank for storage.
overall
, it is clear that
drinking water
can be produced in two main steps by a water
filter.Submitted by 13715019386 on
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