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the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing

the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing
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The table below shows the value of fish that was imported to the US (measured in billions of dollars) in 1988,1992 and 2000,
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 the three pie charts illustrate the amount of fish that the US brought in from China,
Canada
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 and other
countries
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 in the same three years.
Overall
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,the value of
imports
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 rose by just under double over the period given.At the start of the period,the US imported predominantly from
Canada
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 but,by 1992 other
countries
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 became the main source. Regarding the table,the value of
imports
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 started at $6.57 billion in the first year,increasing to $8.52 in 1992 and reaching $10.72 in the
last
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 year. In terms of the source of fish importation,
Canada
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 supplied the overwhelming majority in 1998 (60%) compared to China and other
countries
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 which provided only 13% and 27% respectively.The
imports
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 from
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canada
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 proceeded to fall to 28% in the final year.
Conversely
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,by 1992,other
countries
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 had replaced
Canada
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 as the main supplier and made up 46% of all
imports
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 in 1992 and 42% by 2000.
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,
imports
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 from China rose over the period to reach 30% in 2000.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada, countries, imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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