The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given diagrams illustrate a

sports

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centre of a university as it is now and its future development plan.

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, the new plan will introduce a leisure

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, a

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hall,

two

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dance studios,

two

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changing rooms, a

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shop and a cafe. As a major development, outdoor courts on the East and West sides of the centre

pool

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will be replaced with a

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hall and a leisure

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respectively.

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two

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new dancing studios will be built left of the

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hall. These changing rooms will be located in

southeast

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and southwest corners. South Western corner changing room will be built closer to the leisure

pool

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to facilitate

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users.

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to that, a new

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shop is planned to the left side from the entrance,

while

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introducing a cafe to the right side. These

two

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areas will be attached to changing rooms. The existing gym will be expanded so that more people can use the facility.The Center

pool

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and its changing room will remain the same

along with

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the seating area and the reception.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports, pool, two with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

178 words

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