There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?

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of factors to be considered when an employee
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to stay with the same institution and others think that
money
is the ultimate
reason
. I disagree with
this
statement and believe that the
reasons
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workers
are encourage
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to work in
same
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company
because
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they value respect and harmony among
workers
. There are people who decided to work with the same company because of
work
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the work
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ethics
that is
being observed by the
workers
.
In addition
,
money
cannot buy happiness
this
is
one
of the main
reason
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reasons
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why people respect
one
another.
Moreover
,
this
characterictic
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characteristic
will bring success to the employees and
institution
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the institution
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.
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, the ER nurses and doctors most of the time faces critical situation and everyone is under time pressure. The team successfully manage the situation by being calm and polite
amongst
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each other. Another
reason
why I disagree
that
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money
is the main
reason
because
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is because
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harmonious relationship among employees is far much
important
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and worth it to remain in
same
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the same
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company. Apart from that, if a person is already comfortable and
gain
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the trust of everyone
then
this
is
one
main factor to
considered
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consider
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not leaving the job. Successfully gaining rapport among colleagues is
one
of the workes
achievement
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achievements
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.
For instance
, statistic shows that
workers
tend to stay in the same
workplace
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work
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because they fear leaving their workmates. In conclusion, employees stayed in the same workplace where they are
being
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admired and gained
harmonious
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a harmonious
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relationship
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relationships
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with co-
workers
.
This
is why
i
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disagree that
money
is the main
reason
to
saty
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stay
in the same institution.
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