There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?
There are
lot
of factors to be considered when an employee Change the article
a lot
opt
to stay with the same institution and others think that Correct subject-verb agreement
opts
money
is the ultimate reason
. I disagree with this
statement and believe that the reasons
Fix the agreement mistake
reason
workers
are encourage
to work in Change the verb form
are encouraged
same
company Add an article
the same
because
they value respect and harmony among Add a missing verb
is because
workers
.
There are people who decided to work with the same company because of work
ethics Correct article usage
the work
that is
being observed by the workers
. In addition
, money
cannot buy happiness this
is one
of the main reason
why people respect Fix the agreement mistake
reasons
one
another. Moreover
, this
characterictic
will bring success to the employees and Correct your spelling
characteristic
institution
. Correct article usage
the institution
For example
, the ER nurses and doctors most of the time faces critical situation and everyone is under time pressure. The team successfully manage the situation by being calm and polite amongst
each other.
Another Change preposition
to
reason
why I disagree that
Add a missing verb
is that
money
is the main reason
because
harmonious relationship among employees is far much Add a missing verb
is because
important
and worth it to remain in Correct quantifier usage
more important
same
company. Apart from that, if a person is already comfortable and Add an article
the same
gain
the trust of everyone Correct subject-verb agreement
gains
then
this
is one
main factor to considered
not leaving the job. Successfully gaining rapport among colleagues is Change the form of the verb
consider
one
of the workes achievement
. Fix the agreement mistake
achievements
For instance
, statistic shows that workers
tend to stay in the same workplace
because they fear leaving their workmates.
In conclusion, employees stayed in the same workplace where they are Replace the word
work
being
admired and gained Unnecessary verb
apply
harmonious
Add an article
a harmonious
relationship
with co-Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
workers
. This
is why i
disagree that Change the capitalization
I
money
is the main reason
to saty
in the same institution.Correct your spelling
stay
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