There are many reasons that can motivate a person to stay working for the same company. Some believe that money is the main reason. Do you agree or disagree?

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to stay with the same institution and others think that

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workers

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they value respect and harmony among

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cannot buy happiness

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why people respect

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will bring success to the employees and

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why I disagree

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money

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is the main

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harmonious relationship among employees is far much

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and worth it to remain in

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company. Apart from that, if a person is already comfortable and

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the trust of everyone

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not leaving the job. Successfully gaining rapport among colleagues is

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of the workes

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, statistic shows that

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tend to stay in the same

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because they fear leaving their workmates. In conclusion, employees stayed in the same workplace where they are

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admired and gained

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a harmonious

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relationship

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with co-

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disagree that

money

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is the main

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saty

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stay

in the same institution.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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4 paragraphs

259 words

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