Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinio

Some citizens believe that it is preferable to educate females and males in separate

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, others argue that there are more advantages

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attending

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education

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schools

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one is a preferable method because

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is how a real

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works. Many individuals argue that separate

schools

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are

better

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option to keep

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on studies and avoid

distructors

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distractions

destructors

distractors

among boys and girls.

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,

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type of

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is supported

for

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affluent families who

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that

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is a private

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for those who can afford it.

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, they believe that these students might have a higher

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system that

focus

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on specific topics for each gender because each of them

learn

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from a different environment. To explain

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the

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UK university, one study reveals that most of these separate

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have

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select programs that avoid sexual topics for females to keep them protected

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revealing sexual information and

controlled

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girls of not initiating romantic relations.

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, I believe the real world does not function in separate roles. Most of

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society

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believe

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in a

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system because

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system offers many advantages for females and males.

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with, interacting

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genres at

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age provide them with more experiences to learn from each other.

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, they might build critical skills to be able to adapt themselves

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society

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later in

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, the university of Fullerton reveals that a recent study proves that those students who graduated in

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systems were able to have better relationships than those who attended separate

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is

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a preferable

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way of thinking because in real

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we interact with women and men. In conclusion,

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there are many people who believe in separate

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,

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is not a natural atmosphere of learning because real

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do

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not work in

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way. it is preferable to interact with both genres at

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age to have plenty of experiences and learn

form

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each other because

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is how

society

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works. I believe

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is a preferable way of learning to be able to cope in real

life

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.