You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have recently visited a museum. Now write a letter to your friend about the museum you have visited. Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write: where you went what you saw there how you felt about it You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...................,

Dear Jonas, I hope
this
letter finds you well! It's been a
while
since our
last
one but here I am with some exciting news about my trip to NY
last
month! I'll start by saying that one of the main things I did during my days there was to visit the MOMA museum. I don't know if you've ever heard about it but it is a huge building near Broadway. Let me tell you more about
this
.
First
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when you enter the building you need to check well if you have all the tickets you will need later on for the different activities you might choose.
Then
, once you passed the security check you are free to go whenever you like, and guess what? Yes, I chose contemporary art! My favourite subject at school remember? When I crossed the main glass door of the exhibition and I found myself surrounded by all those drawings, I had a feeling that I'd never felt before, it was amazing and I let myself explore everything as if I was a child in a toy store. It was an experience that I will never forget! I hope
this
letter gives you the courage to follow your dreams and do what you really want to! Best wishes, Nico
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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