Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forest amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The phenomenon of dropping
area
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of
forest
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has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on
this
issue in question may be, I totally agree that trees are important to the earth. So, more damage to the forests
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faster
our
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world
to die. Of all the reasons why forests can
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determine
determined
the death of the
world
, probably the most significant one is that most mammals survive
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oxygen and tree would purify and release the air for them.
For example
, in the industrialization
world
, a lot of factories have been established to
fullfill
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fulfil
the
demind
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demand
demands
of humans in various fields which is the main reason that causes air pollution.
Therefore
, less plant would
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most animals in the
world
. Another reason that should not be overlooked is that climate change has a serious impact
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the extinction of wide life in turn killing forests.
For example
, technology
product
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products
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like
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vehicles
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produce
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a lot of carbon dioxide into the
atmostphere
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atmosphere
. It
destories
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destroys
the
temperture
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temperature
system of
earth
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which causes
to
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climate change and
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the migration of wide animals
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too early.
As a result
, more and more
specise
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species
become
extinction
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. More important point is that
,
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spread
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of
trees'seeds
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tree seeds
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depand
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depend
on the migration system.
Hence
,
less
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animals less
tree
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trees
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will be born. Under
this
line of thinking, it seems to me that
destruction
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of the forest would affect many different problems and cause
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the death of the
woild
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world
in the end. So, I completely agree with the idea.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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