Many people go to university for academic study. More people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that many people prefer to pursue academic studies at university rather than

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follow vocational training courses. Despite the need

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university graduates, I completely agree that vocational training studies should be encouraged

due to

the shortage of qualified manual

workers

. There are several reasons why more

workers

should be trained in skilled professions like pumping,

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work. The first reason is,

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play an important role in constructing new buildings, renovating or simply maintaining the facilities.

As a result

, our standard of living is ensured and the safety of citizens is protected. The second reason is the imbalance

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the economy, which has resulted in a huge amount of unemployed graduates

while

the shortage of

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manual

laborers

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is experiencing an upward trend. Taking Vietnam as an example, only 26% of

workers

have degrees of professional training or high-qualified skills,

while

low-skilled

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can't meet business needs.

Therefore

, students should be encouraged to take vocational training courses. The first thing is, schools should integrate practical subjects into the school curriculum

instead

of replacing all theory classes.

For instance

, schools can offer students some workshops that help them to learn hands-on skills and gain greater insights into their future jobs. Another thing is that parents not only have

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for explaining the future prospects of manual jobs but

also

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workers

as a way of teaching their

childrens

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. In the final analysis,

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some people that students should apply to university for academic studies, I personally agree vocational training courses would be better for them

due to

the need

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manual

workers

with professional skills.