You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter, Write why you are writing the letter What kind of information you want How and by when you can get the requested information

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Mostafa, I just arrived in Paris coming from Alexandria on a business trip to meet some suppliers related to my job, I am writing

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letter to seek your advice for some information about the area surrounding the city.

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is my first time visiting Paris and I searched on the Internet for which places to visit but the results were not useful, so I would like to know more about the places which I can visit around the city. To clarify, I will stay for one week and I wish to check some historical places at the weekend.

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, I hope to see the most popular museums, theatres and the most recent modern buildings,

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, taking photos of

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to share with my friends.

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but not least, you can send me

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data to my accommodation which is Meridian Hotel or you can send it via my email: [email protected] Yours faithfully Mostafa

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coherence and cohesion

Try to use paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should focus on one main idea and be clearer.

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Include more specific requests for information, like specific names of places or activities.

greeting and closing

The letter has a polite greeting and closing, which is great for formal letters.

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You expressed your eagerness to explore the city, which shows a positive attitude.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

166 words

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recent
country
work
visa
information
city
housing
transportation
grocery
medical
facilities
recommendations
safe
neighborhoods
cultural
attractions
customs
language
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