In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In a significant number of nations, many

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are not sending their offspring to educational institutions but rather making them learn at

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by them.

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phenomenon saves money for them and they can educate

children

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in accordance with their needs,

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essay considers that these benefits for

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do not outweigh the drawbacks because mothers and fathers are not qualified to impart

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, their sons and daughters may lag-behind in life.

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trend of not sending

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to primary or vocational institutions and making them learn the basics of

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at

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is gaining importance in many developing states.

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the fact that

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are not well-off and do not have the financial resources to register their boys and

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in

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. Another reason for

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practice is that men and women consider themselves to have more understanding of the needs of their

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,

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which they think that they can be good teachers.

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a survey conducted in Pakistan, many

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in rural Sindh did not send their

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, especially

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to

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and gave them some basic tips for reading

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religious books only. In my estimation, people can save some money

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practice, but their kids will suffer more because of

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, it is argued by many that since

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are not qualified teachers to impart even the basics of learning,

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, the negatives are far more significant than the positives. It is undeniable that many citizens, especially

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developing countries, in developing

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are not literate and they do not know about the techniques or methods, which are presently adopted to make students understand and learn.

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, for those boys and

girls

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who have not been sent to

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but rather taught at

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, many surveys have pointed out that those

children

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have remained behind in life and have not been able to compete with other students, who have obtained

education

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from

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.

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, in Pakistan, many learners, who have obtained only

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religious

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and have not seen the doors of

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, were not considered for jobs when those, who went to higher educational institutions,

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applied for

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jobs. In conclusion,

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people will save money and may provide some basics to their

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if they decide to teach them at

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only, I think that with

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practice, their boys and

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will stay behind in life and will not have those techniques and knowledge, which are required because of their disqualification in teaching, and the advantages of

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decision will not outweigh the drawbacks.