In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

There has been a marked difference in subject preferences between girls, who often
enroll
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in
art based
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courses
, and boys, who have a tendency to
study
some form of science. There are a number of elements that may cause
this
issue, and I personally feel that it is best not to apply any changes to
this
tendency. The aforementioned situation can be attributed to gender-specific personalities and competence.
Firstly
, female
students
are usually attracted to subjects that require tremendous self-discipline and patience
such
as language classes
while
male
students
share a common interest in several fields that need considerable analytical abilities to excel at,
for
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math or physics.
Secondly
, it has been proven that each of the two sexes shows distinct competence and excellence in their
favored
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subjects. In general, most
students
prefer to choose classes that they are best at, which is why boys and girls choose different
courses
to
study
. In my view, it is rather unnecessary to make changes to
this
trend.
Initially
,
students
choose the environment where they can best cultivate their skills and abilities.
Therefore
, if they were forced to take part in unwanted classes, it would produce undesirable outcomes, especially resentment or negative attitudes toward
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at school.
Furthermore
,
students
, regardless of gender, should have
their
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freedom to choose.
In other words
, they should be at liberty to decide what
courses
they can attend so that they will feel that they are respected and listened to. In conclusion, distinct characteristics and differing levels of
competence
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between males and females are the main causes for the tendency toward choosing particular
courses
to
study
at schools and universities, and I believe that
students
should be entitled to participate in any class they desire.
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