Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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and financially stable
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do provide financial aid to the
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that are in need of
poverty
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which is a
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relief
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suffering from
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, and
poverty
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finacial
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to the country but it does not
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solve the main issue
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people
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which is
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. When providing
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financial
suport
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only a percentage is provided to the
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of the country as they are mainly considered as
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fiancial
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financial
aid to stabilize the economy of the country as well. It's recommended for the developed
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to understand the basic needs of the undeveloped
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countries
and to contribute the
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items
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accordingly
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could reach the
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in a manner.
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developed
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do provide financial
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to the
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living in Somalia and other
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, but it never
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the
poverty
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. It would be advisable if they could
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intervene
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rather than providing
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relief
reliefs
releifs
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it would be appreciated if they could
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and solve the issues permanently as it will be a
soulution
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solution
for the undeveloped
countried
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countries
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
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  • education
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  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
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