The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph indicates the

oversease

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overseas

visitors to the coast, mountains and

the

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lakes in a European country during the

period

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of 1987 -2007. As per the

graph

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we could see the visit to the lakes have a gradual increase

upto

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up to

the year 2007, and it reaches

the

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a

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peak during the

the

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period

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of 2002, and after

that

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there is a slight drop. The tourist visiting the mountain has a slight increase

throught

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through

throughout

the

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from 1987 to 2007, and it's in between the twenty thousand to

thirty five

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thirty-five

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thousand people visiting. When we see the people visiting the

coatal

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coastal

areas we could see there is a minor drop during the

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1992 but

thereafter

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we could notice a tremendous increase. We could conclude that the

visitors

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number of visitors

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would

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who would

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like to visit the coastal places is higher when compared to the mountain and

the lakes areas

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the areas of the lake

the areas of the lakes

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.