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International Student Enrolment Numbers: De Salle University

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The given line graph illustrates International
Students
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 Enrolment Numbers, in thousands from India, Vietnam, Nepal, Indonesia, and Colombia at De
Salle
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University
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 from 1980 to 2020. The number of
students
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 from different nationalities increased over time and peaked in 2020. Since 1985 Indian
students
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 were the highest enrolment number at De
Salle
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University
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. Obviously, Colombian
students
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 gradually increased but still the lowest enrolled nationality indeed. As compared to other nationalities, Indian student
enrollment
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 at De
Salle
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University
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 increased by 5000, from 1980 to 2000 and
this
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 amount doubled in the next 20 years. In 2020
students
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 who enrolled from India reached 15000 at De
Salle
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University
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. The
enrollment
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 number of Colombian
students
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 barely passed 1000
students
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 and reached 1500
students
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 in 2020. Other nationalities
such
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 as Vietnam, Nepal, and Indonesia have similar features except from 2010 to 2020. In 2010 Vietnamese and Nepalian student
enrollment
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 rapidly increased and peaked to respectively 10000 and 9000
students
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 in 2020.
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, Indonesian student
enrollment
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 gradually increased and reached 1500
students
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.
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