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Nowadays, working freelance is becoming a trend. Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

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These days many people are working as freelancers it's being trending nowadays, it has
numorous
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numerous
 advantages,
However
, there are a few disadvantages as well.
Firstly
, the primary benefit of being a
freelancer
 is being the boss of your
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, you don't have to answer anyone
in particular
 and you can work
in
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their
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 own time. for suppose, if one is working in a company there will be some policies that they need to follow
such
 as coming on time, fixed breaks and using of mobile or talking to someone
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 the company will not be allowed. meanwhile working as a
freelancer
 will be quite peaceful
for example
, you can work
at
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 your comfort place where there is
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out side
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 disturbance, and another
benifit
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benefit
benefits
 can be working on multiple
projects
 a
freelancer
 can bid the as many
projects
 as he
want
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later
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 work on them and finish.
Secondly
, there are a few drawbacks to being
a freelancers
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freelancers
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such
 as there will be no fixed salary, Suppose, a software engineer working in a company will get a salary
at the end
 of every month
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 if a
freelancer
 does not have any
projects
 will be not able to get any money, and another disadvantage would be the equipment he
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have
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 suppose a person able to get a project
then
 he must finish with resources he got if the equipment not suitable for that project
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 his headache. In conclusion, there are more benefits than disadvantages
being
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 a
freelancers
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freelancer
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,
however
, the drawback can be a huge mess because if a person's profile gets a low rating they might not get any new
projects
.
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