In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.

Youngesters

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Youngsters

in several nations

are

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involved in work in one way or the other to gain money. many

indidivals

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individuals

are

with

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the view that

this

practice is

inappriopriate

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inappropriate

meanwhlie

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meanwhile

other party thinks it is an important form of working experience.

Children

are the most vital

as well as

fragile

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asset of a nation.

children

of late have the habit of spending most of their time on unuseful activities like playing video games, watching cartoons etc. It is of

this

view that adult in the nation thinks that these kids can be productive to the family

as well as

gain some working skills if they are engaged in

income generating

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work rather than wasting their precious time lazing about. Others in the countries

however

dispute

this

fact in that they are too weak to be involved in working.

this

essay will talk about

about

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both the advantages and the drawbacks of

this

act.

Firstly

,

children

who are engaged in skills training at

this

age turn

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out to

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have of great advantage over their

collagues

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colleagues

who did not get

such

privillage

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privilege

privileges

.

for

example

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a child who

get

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the opportunity to be

enroll

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in a fashion school during vacation period will end up getting

an

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handwork

that

is

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sewing

of

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cloth

whereas

the one who stayed at home watching television will not gain

such

skills.

Conversely

, as we all know school vacation or break is a time to rest the mind and the body. not all

children

have what it takes to stand

stress

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. if

such

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youngster is forced into jobs at

this

stage, they will end up breaking down

psychologicall

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psychological

psychologically

.

However

,

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believe that a parent must know the

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strength

strenght

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strength

of the ward so as to know whether to involve the child in work or not