The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts show five categories representing the main reasons that
tourists
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chose to visit Orange
City
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in 2006 and 2016. 

In general, tourism to Orange
City
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nearly doubled over the ten-year period. Combining both years, annual
events
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attracted the most
tourists
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to the
city
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.
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, theatre performances and the attractions associated with the generic category “other” compelled the smallest
number
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of people to visit.

In 2006, annual
events
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and museums were responsible for most of Orange
City
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’s tourism, accounting for 72% of the visitors. That same year,
tourists
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who listed restaurants as their primary interest only accounted for 10%, or 100,000 people.  
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, ten years later  that
number
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increased dramatically.  By 2016, the
number
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of travellers coming to Orange
City
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for its restaurants brought in 41% of the 1.9 million
tourists
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, representing an increase of approximately 700,000 visitors.   

Annual
events
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, museums, and theatres each accounted for a smaller percentage of the
overall
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tourist numbers in 2016.  In regards to annual
events
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, the actual
number
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of
tourists
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still rose from about 450,000 to about 600,000.  The
number
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of
tourists
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who came to see theatre performances remained fairly even, and the
number
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of
tourists
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visiting museums actually declined, from about 270,000 to about 210,000.
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