The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts show five categories representing the main reasons that
tourists
chose to visit Orange
City
in 2006 and 2016. 

In general, tourism to Orange
City
nearly doubled over the ten-year period. Combining both years, annual
events
attracted the most
tourists
to the
city
.
By contrast
, theatre performances and the attractions associated with the generic category “other” compelled the smallest
number
of people to visit.

In 2006, annual
events
and museums were responsible for most of Orange
City
’s tourism, accounting for 72% of the visitors. That same year,
tourists
who listed restaurants as their primary interest only accounted for 10%, or 100,000 people.  
However
, ten years later  that
number
increased dramatically.  By 2016, the
number
of travellers coming to Orange
City
for its restaurants brought in 41% of the 1.9 million
tourists
, representing an increase of approximately 700,000 visitors.   

Annual
events
, museums, and theatres each accounted for a smaller percentage of the
overall
tourist numbers in 2016.  In regards to annual
events
, the actual
number
of
tourists
still rose from about 450,000 to about 600,000.  The
number
of
tourists
who came to see theatre performances remained fairly even, and the
number
of
tourists
visiting museums actually declined, from about 270,000 to about 210,000.
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