The charts below provide the primary reason tourists visited Orange City in two different years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts show five categories representing the main reasons that
tourists
chose to visit Orange Use synonyms
City
in 2006 and 2016.
In general, tourism to Orange Use synonyms
City
nearly doubled over the ten-year period. Combining both years, annual Use synonyms
events
attracted the most Use synonyms
tourists
to the Use synonyms
city
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By contrast
, theatre performances and the attractions associated with the generic category “other” compelled the smallest Linking Words
number
of people to visit.
In 2006, annual Use synonyms
events
and museums were responsible for most of Orange Use synonyms
City
’s tourism, accounting for 72% of the visitors. That same year, Use synonyms
tourists
who listed restaurants as their primary interest only accounted for 10%, or 100,000 people. Use synonyms
However
, ten years later that Linking Words
number
increased dramatically. By 2016, the Use synonyms
number
of travellers coming to Orange Use synonyms
City
for its restaurants brought in 41% of the 1.9 million Use synonyms
tourists
, representing an increase of approximately 700,000 visitors.
Annual Use synonyms
events
, museums, and theatres each accounted for a smaller percentage of the Use synonyms
overall
tourist numbers in 2016. In regards to annual Linking Words
events
, the actual Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
still rose from about 450,000 to about 600,000. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
who came to see theatre performances remained fairly even, and the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
tourists
visiting museums actually declined, from about 270,000 to about 210,000.Use synonyms
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