The image below explains the process of how pollutants from modern life become acid rain that in turn pollutes the environment and the food chain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The diagram shows how toxic elements coming from everyday urban industries end up polluting aliments and air by being transformed into
acide
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acid
rains
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rain
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. The process starts with their emission and ends up with them
reintering
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entering
reentering
the food chain. First of all, housing, transport, factories and power station activities produce vast quantities of
pollutants
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as carbon dioxide, sulphur dioxide, nitrogen oxides, mercury and other compounds that are emitted through exhaust pipes.
Due to
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these emissions clouds end up
aborbing
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absorbing
aborting
pollutants
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while
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moving across the earth thanks to
the
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apply
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wind action and other physic phenomenons. When clouds laden with
pollutants
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stops
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their moving they are ready to discharge as acid rain that
fall
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down onto different places, from hills and
fiels
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fields
files
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to trees and plants and
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into rivers and lakes populated by different ecosystems that inevitably soak them up.
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,
pollutants
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are able to enter the food chain through those living being
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creating a cycle of toxicity in the environment.
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