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Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education in adult populations who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Formal schooling for the young is of immense significance for a country’s socio-economic development,
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, some people are convinced that more money should be allocated for educating illiterate
adults
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. I agree with
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 view to some extent and will analyse the issue in the following essay. On the one hand, government budgets in many countries, particularly in
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 and developing nations, are limited.
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, if more funding is spent on improving adult literacy rates, the
education
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 of children and adolescents may suffer
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 of less funding. Eventually, maintaining a suitable level and quality of
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, for both children and illiterate
adults
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, may become an impossible task with limited funding, possibly negatively affecting the
education
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 of both groups.
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,
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 a decrease in the number of blue-collar jobs, thanks to automatic processes, a large number of illiterate
adults
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 who work in
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 positions are being made redundant,
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therefore
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 increasing the unemployment rate
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 their lack of literacy skills when searching for other types of work.
This
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 situation not only reduces the standard of living for many people, but is
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 an underlying motive for a rise in social problems,
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 as crime, homelessness, and poverty. Providing formal schooling to
adults
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 who cannot read or write proves to be a useful measure to reduce the negative consequences that may occur in a society with high levels of adult illiteracy. In conclusion, state funding may not allow an adequate amount of money for the
education
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 of both the youth and
adults
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 to take effect.
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, I still believe that if more money is spent on educating illiterate
adults
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, social welfare in
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 regions will benefit tremendously.
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Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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