The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided diagram denotes the process of becoming an adult frog from the form of
eggs
.
Overall
, the life cycle consist
of eleven stages starting from Change the verb form
consists
eggs
layed
by adult frogs. Correct your spelling
laid
Besides
, half of the cycle is based on
underwater Change preposition
apply
while
the other half in
land area.
Add a missing verb
is in
To begin
, fully grown frogs lays
Change the verb form
lay
large
number of Change the article
a large
the large
eggs
at a time in water
, which Add an article
the water
then
becomes an embryo. A few days later, the embryo transforms into tadpoles which are clinging to plants in the ponds. Then
, in the next stage
external grills develop in Add a comma
,stage
tadpole's
body to start breathing Correct article usage
the tadpole's
while
a
tail keeps on growing. After that, hindlegs Correct article usage
the
appears
to support movements. Correct subject-verb agreement
appear
However
, at this
stage tadpoles live from the food they have stored in their tails.
In few
days, two front legs Correct article usage
a few
appears
to facilitate faster movements of the baby frogs, yet the long tail remains. Change the verb form
appear
Nevertheless
, the tail becomes smaller in the next stages and disappears, which leads baby
toad to become younger. With enough food and nutrients , young Correct article usage
the baby
toad
grow into adult forms that are capable of repopulating Fix the agreement mistake
toads
eggs
to maintain the life cycle.Submitted by dmdeemanthakasun on
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