The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided diagram denotes the process of becoming an adult frog from the form of

eggs

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Overall

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, the life cycle

consist

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consists

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of eleven stages starting from

eggs

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layed

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laid

by adult frogs.

Besides

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, half of the cycle is based

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apply

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underwater

while

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the other half

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is in

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land area.

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, fully grown frogs

lays

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lay

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large

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a large

the large

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number of

eggs

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at a time in

water

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the water

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, which

then

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becomes an embryo. A few days later, the embryo transforms into tadpoles which are clinging to plants in the ponds.

Then

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, in the next

stage

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external grills develop in

tadpole's

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the tadpole's

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body to start breathing

while

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the

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tail keeps on growing. After that, hindlegs

appears

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appear

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to support movements.

However

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, at

this

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stage tadpoles live from the food they have stored in their tails. In

few

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a few

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days, two front legs

appears

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appear

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to facilitate faster movements of the baby frogs, yet the long tail remains.

Nevertheless

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, the tail becomes smaller in the next stages and disappears, which leads

baby

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the baby

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toad to become younger. With enough food and nutrients , young

toad

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toads

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grow into adult forms that are capable of repopulating

eggs

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to maintain the life cycle.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words eggs with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Metamorphosis
Tadpole
Aquatic
Terrestrial
Hatch
Mature
Lungs
Eggs
Pond
Life Cycle
Lay eggs
Develop
Adapt
Tail shortening

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