The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
process
illustrates how sugar
is produced from sugar
cane with some methods.
It can be clearly seen that there are seven distinct steps are
involved to manufacture Unnecessary verb
apply
sugar
as an end product from its organic main raw material called sugar
cane.
After the growing process
completed
, Add a missing verb
is completed
sugar
canes
are harvested by manpower or farmer trucks. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Then
, these collected sugar
canes
are put on the press machine to do crushing
Add an article
the crushing
process
. Due to
the limited capacity of the press machine, only exact
number of Correct article usage
the exact
sugar
canes
can be filled up at the same time.
While
this
long stage continue
, Change the verb form
continues
juice
which can derived
from crushed Change the verb form
be derived
canes
is collapsed by limestone
filter. The main Correct article usage
a limestone
funcionality
of Correct your spelling
functionality
this
filter is generating more pure juice
rather than previous
mixture of Add an article
a previous
the previous
juice
. Next of
the Change preposition
to
filterisation
Correct your spelling
filtration
process
, purifed
Correct your spelling
purified
juice
converts syrup
in Change preposition
to syrup
evaporator
by applying high temperatures. Add an article
the evaporator
After
this
, syrup and sugar
crystals are collected in centrifuge
. In Add an article
a centrifuge
the centrifuge
this
step, this
mixture is divided into sugar
crystals. Finally
, crystals are left in the tube for drying
and cooling Correct article usage
the drying
process
ended up with finished
good product namely Correct article usage
a finished
sugar
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