In their advertesing, businesses nowadays usally emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
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promotions
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the release
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the product
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the drawbacks
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outweigh
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the benefits
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of
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it is clear that
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This
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Firstly
, it is a negative development because this
promotion methods affect adversely principal points of our communities. Correct determiner usage
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For instance
, nowadays most of
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little aged kids want to have Correct article usage
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the
last
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a tight
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kind of latest updates on technology area especially. So it ends up with problematic cases between families and their children and also
between similar ages of young individuals. Secondly
, this
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possibility
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the possibility
a possibility
instead
of other terms, I would have great suspects
about the firm’s sustainability and market succession.
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