In their advertesing, businesses nowadays usally emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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popular choice among sellers

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promotion

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mainly based on

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date of

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be seen

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on

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development. It is irrefutable to analyse that companies are more focused on

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of what they sell. By doing

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, they tend to follow more aggressive marketing

ethiques

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ethics

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in the

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century. At the same time,

it is clear that

marketing strategies are reviewed by changing consumer habits lately.

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inclination, more and more individuals

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consumarism

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consumerism

mentality.

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flawed mentality, using something old is a low-statue symbol and represents

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being

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poor in our failed society.

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high school, once I carried my old-school mobile phone to

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school. Right after one of my

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had found my cell phone, he suddenly

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insulted me

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saying full of negative comments.

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problematic approach can be detrimental

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both our society and manufacturers.

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, it is a negative development because

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promotion methods affect adversely principal points of our communities.

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the

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little aged kids want to have

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last

model of

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iPhone

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the reasons of advertisements that give importance

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its model. Impoverished and poor families have

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budget

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to catch

this

kind of latest updates on technology area especially. So it ends up with problematic cases between families and their children and

also

between similar ages of young individuals.

Secondly

,

this

has a negative impact on brands and companies. If producers were mostly concentrated on their

products

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models rather than functionality or quality, it would

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possibility

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to bring negative reviews in the long term. From my perspective, if a brand put more emphasise on release dates

instead

of other terms, I would have great

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about the firm’s sustainability and market succession. In conclusion,

while

it is understandable that sellers are getting more giving their

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to

produce

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new models fastly, I think it is not a positive development in terms of both social and business fields.