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The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The pie charts given illustrate the proportions of various
waste
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 disposal methods in the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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,
Sweden
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 and
United
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 Kingdom.
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, it is observed that all three countries
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 differ in their most common way to treat harmful
waste
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.
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, the United Kingdom adopt a larger variety of
waste
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 processing options than the other two. First of all,
both
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Republic
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 of
Korea
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 and
Sweden
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 only utilise 3 methods to dispose of their
waste
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, namely recycling, burying underground and incineration. In comparison, the United Kingdom employs two additional ways, including chemical treatment and dumping at sea. Moving on to the most popular choice of
waste
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 treatment, the charts indicate that the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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 prefers recycling the most, with 69% of their dangerous discharge handled
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 way; for
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,
underground
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 burial of unwanted materials was the most favoured route, accounting for more than half of all wasted processed.
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 treatment method
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 makes up the largest proportion in the U.K. at 82%. It is notable that burning trash is the least utilised across all three countries, at 9% in the
Republic
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 of
Korea
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, 20% in
Sweden
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 and only 2% in the U.K.
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, in the U.K, 8% of
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 disposal is chemically treated and the same percentage is discharged into the ocean.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, republic, korea, sweden with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dangerous waste products
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Incineration
  • Chemical treatment
  • Landfill
  • Disposal methods
  • Hazardous
  • Environmental protection
  • Sustainability
  • Waste reduction
  • Toxic substances
  • E-waste
  • Sanitary engineering
  • Biodegradable
  • Non-biodegradable
  • Regulations
  • Compliance
  • Contamination
  • Conservation
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