You have recently moved to a new apartment. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe your new apartment invite him/her to pay a visit

Dear Anna, It's been so long since we were in touch with each other, but I haven't forgotten the wonderful time we had

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year. I have moved to a beautiful river-view apartment in Amsterdam. I had some issues with the old property owner about the rent. They have increased the rent without any prior notice or consultation. I had been living there for eight years without any complaints. I have been forced to move to a new place

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circumstance. My new apartment is a river view site in Northern Amsterdam,

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more spacious than the old one. The balcony is big enough to accommodate a table and four chairs. Despite I am living alone, I choose

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to accommodate my friends for short stays. You should have visited me here and spent some days with me. I will bake strawberry tart, your favourite, though I am a disaster in the kitchen. Let me know what you think. Warm regards, Jennifer.

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